DreamEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gauntlet Preview]

Good Start, but a bit too blue as-is...

I definitely like the design that you've created here, but I think it needs some little details/ different colors involved now! I really do have to complement the details that you've done here with just paper though; really incredible! :D

Overall I think this rocks, but needs a couple more little things!
Great work!

~Sonik

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MajesticBob responds:

Thanks! While there is still much more to do, I kinda want to keep it monochrome, I.E. Blue. However your not the first to request more color so when it's all said and done that might just happen. Thank you again for the review.

[Greek Heritage]

Holy Crap! :DD

This artwork is amazing, and I really applaud you for creating these 3D masterpieces! I can't even imagine where you begin...
I Digress...

This piece is wonderful, and I really loved the color scheme used; it actually did remind me of the "300" artwork as mentioned in Coop's review below.

The actual characters themselves are masterpieces, and I really love how realistic you made these guys look; You my friend are a talented motha fcka!

I cannot wait to see your next works buddy... you rock! :D
~Sonik

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samulis responds:

Thanks, I'll keep putting up works and asking for the Review Request Club to review them (seriously, you guys give the best feedback I have ever seen).

[Some Weird Guy]

Woah...

It's funny how this guy kinda reminds me of a character from the Fairly Oddparents xD; anyway, this guy's head is way too big in this picture. In-fact the character up front is blocking just about everything that seems to be going on behind. The colors in this are pretty odd, and I can't really understand why anyones hair would look like that.

Things to take a second looks at:
- That eyeball popping out could really use some detail work; what are those light things? is he a robot?
- Why is this stuff going on in the background? is is important?
- Who is causing all of this stuff to go on?

Honestly I feel like I could go on and on, but I wont;
What I will do though is say that you should really make sure that you have one primary focus for your art pieces rather than trying to fit a bunch of things within on picture.

Overall not bad, not great
~Dj Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Thanks for reviewing. The stuff going on in the backgrounds in'st really important. In future art submissions I won't cram a bunch of irrelevant stuff in the backgrounds. And his hair is meant to be weird.

And maybe he IS a robot.

[Random Happy Guy]

Not bad for this cartoonish style.

I really like the work you did on the guy in the Background, his face and body positioning are perfect. The main guy that is right up in your face seems to be crazy, and I assume that this is a school he goes to. From there I also assume that the fire in the background is his doing.

The main character doesn't look horrible, but he doesn't look great either; you should really work on those outlines a bit more, and study up on your shading.
Like other submissions you've done, I see shading in some places, and lack of it in others.

You're definitely improving though MisterTig
Keep up the good work buddy!
~Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Thanks. Yeah I'm going to be better at shading in the future hopefully. :D And yes the fire in the background is his doing.

[Sitting By The Sunlight]

Wonderful :]

I really love the background, and all of the features that you added into it!
The colors in this probably have to be my favorite part; as they really capture that feeling of an October sundown.

The characters look nice, but I would have liked to see a tad more detail in their faces. also, the dead zombiething/ gaint zombie arm is kinda confusing.
Overall though; that night skyline, moon, and stars over a field of pumpkins did it for me man. This is a really amazing piece bro... i really dig it!

Happy Halloween! :D
~Sonik

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ZombieMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review. Someone else pointed out the arm to me in an earlier review, and you both are right. i should have worked on it's presentation a tad more. As for the lack of details on the face, I tried not to overdo it to much, because I feared of ruining the picture. I'm still trying to get comfortable in this style and I obviously need more time with it.

[Knights]

Really like this one!

This artwork is very impressive!
I really like how well the characters are done, and the background is beautiful; This actually looks like it could have been taken right out of a video game man, really great work.

The colors are all very nice, and everything is proportioned very well.

Things that I didn't like so much:
- The grass and trees seem to look rather fake in comparison o everything else in the picture
- The mountains off in the distance are a bit too smooth and featureless
- The texture on the tree trunk to the right looks pretty fake
- The ground is boring and also looks kind of fake

Overall; this is a great piece of work, but certain things could use a bit more detail.
~Dj Sonik

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samulis responds:

Thanks. :D

The grass and the terrains are two things I'm going to be more careful with in the future to make sure they are more realistic. I generally make my own terrains, so I'll look into getting some rough rock textures on some new ones and also see if I can throw a bump/normal map on there too.

-Samulis

[jeo flys 3]

One hell of an improvement!

The textures/ colors on the inside of the ship look GORGEOUS now, I love how much everything seems to just pop out at you! Alien dude looks like he's fought one hell of a battle now, and he's really off to fck some shit up.

I really liked the little touches in this piece bro, the streaks across the glass to add the reflective look were wonderful, and i love how you gave all of the control pannels that "backlit glow" look! Really great work dude!

Overall, Massive improvement on the previous piece
~Dj Sonik

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Rennis5 responds:

oh sweet a 10!!
if i ever get around to finishing the comic that i'm drafting i think i will use this picture for the cover,
however i'm still nit picking at this, and i think i will make some very minor changes but i don't think i'll upload that version
thanks heeps dude

[Run Gordon, Run!]

woah :o... wha?

This is an interesting picture... but if you have all of these stories thought up, why not animate them?

This picture isn't horrible, but it could use some major work...
I didn't really get what was going on until I read the description...

Things I would definitely fix
- That "Jet-pack" could use some work
- The guy running from the fish doesn't look too bothered by what's going on... so why is he running?
- I don't think that the background should be as blurry as it is... your perspective is a bit off
- Most features in this picture have very little detail

Overall; not godawful, but keep working at it!
~Dj Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Thnaks for reviewing. lol, yeah I know the jetpack look stupid XD

Gordon doesn't look bothered because... well, he just doesn't. He is bothered by what's going on, but he would rather run than be distracted by screaming in horror, but would trather deal with the matter in a cool manner.
He is running because he doesn't want to get eaten.

[Fionna]

Welp, looks like Finn with bewbs xD

You've done very well capturing that Adventure Time artstyle, and I give you major props for that! The color choices are all very nice, and seem to be accurate. The overall image is easy on the eyes, and not much seems to clash... very nicely done :D

In all honesty though, some parts of the body seemed to bug me (Legs, Hands, and Knees mainly). Some lines also seem a tad shaky in this picture, but clean-up for something like that is a quick fix i'm sure...

I don't think that this submission is bad at all, but it could definitely use a little bit of improvement methinks :p

Very well done though!
~Dj Sonik

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PinkRose11 responds:

Thank you!! :D

[Nice job, Ross Fenton! 3]

This picture is alright but...

Very simple...
The picture is very straight forward though, and I easily understand whats going on.

What I would really like to see more of though, is some real detail. Most all of your Art is made from basic shapes and lines, and very little detail is included. I would also really like to see more POP out of this picture.

I'm not sure if it was intentional, but the red to black gradient on Ross Fenton's shirt actually gives the illusion of some decent detail; More Intentional things like this could seriously help your Artwork in my opinion...

But then again... I'm and audio artist...
So what do I know right? xD

Great effort buddy; Im sure that with some practice you'll produce some much better work!

~Dj Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Yes, the thing on Ress Fenton's jacket with the red to black gradients was intentional. Anyway, i found this review helpful for my future submission. Thanks for reviewing. :D