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Harold and Edna

2011-10-24 00:29:46

I lol'd :)

This animation was really different, but in a good way!

I really liked the story, and the vocals/ sound effects were actually recorded with rather good quality. The animation was good, but not the best; I really would have liked to see a bit more fluid motions during the "monster battle", and a few other parts. aside from that, I also really enjoyed the originality of the story... I did not expect that ending haha. :)

Things to take a second look at:
- Things could have been a bit more fluid animation-wise, but you're really on to something with this style
- The exchange of dialogue seemed like it could have moved a little faster (I felt like I spent just a little bit too long waiting to hear each characters lines to come out)

Overall you've got some talent, and I expect to see some amazing work from you in the near future :]

~Dj Sonik

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ManNSmkyRoom responds:

Well, thank you. Yes, I feel the dialogue moves a little slow in some parts too. I did that on purpose, but now watching it back, I think I may have spaced it out just a little much.

The Sugar Claws: F.C.

2011-10-10 06:22:23

Woah!

This was incredible!

The concepts in the comic really, I mean REALLY, took me by surprise!
I never expected the story to get so crazy, twisted, and good! :D

The menu/ navigation/ layout of the whole flash looks wonderful, and I really enjoyed the "cut-scene" like parts at the beginning/ end of this flash.

The artwork was wonderfully unique, and the broad spectrum of bright to dark tones/ colors looked extraordinary! I also really liked how you worked words into the background images of this comic as well; very interesting!

Overall I don't think I would change a single thing about this.
You have some real talent, and do some really great looking/ deep work
I'm definitely a new fan ;)

~Dj Sonik

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Celx-Requin responds:

Thanks man that means alot!
- Celx

-The Gift Giver -

2011-10-10 05:29:09

Not to shabby.

For your first submission, this seems pretty solid!
The lip-syncing seems to be pretty well done, the artwork is decent, and everything seems to flow rather well!

This piece isn't horrible, but it isn't a work of art either; The crude characters, mediocre comedy, and poor storyboarding made this hard to enjoy :(

Things to take a second look at:
- Lack of clarity in the audio made this submission difficult to understand (Haggard's suggestion of subtitles was actually a really great one)
- Crude character design can really contribute to the comedic value of your work (take South Park for example), but you should really focus on your camera angles/ character movement more

Overall solid effort, but could use something more

~Dj Sonik

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ManNSmkyRoom responds:

Thanks for watching, think I may have fixed the audio. Fingers crossed!

-Another Dimension-

2011-10-03 03:18:17

Very interesting! :D

Although some elements of this animation did seem rather childish, I really enjoyed this piece! The 3-D planet was probably the most visually impressive thing to me; I loved how smoothly the background panned along as the 2-D characters moved across the landscape, and the 3-D alien guy was pretty cool as well.

Things I would have changed:
- The edges of most everything in this flash have a rough, nasty look to them
- The 2-D people could have used a little more movement

Besides that though; This is an awesome effort!

~Dj Sonik

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Carr77 responds:

Yeah, I know, the 2D people are a bit stiff ;)
Thanks!

Achivement Madness

2011-10-03 01:34:47

Great effort, but lacking in detail.

A few things majorly stood out to me in this animation. I loved how fluid the "Kill the sheriff" scene looked, I really started to feel like the animation was starting to pick-up at this point. The Back-Flip animation that followed was equally great, and I really started to get into this! After that clip though, I started to see what I feel might have been a bit of laziness peaking through...

Things I would have focused on a little more:
- The vocal work in this was pretty muddy sounding, and overall really quiet compared to the other audio
- A lot of the other audio effects were also kinda loud, and harsh on the ears
- Did he finish all of the achievements?
- The story was somewhat hard to follow; the list in the beginning moved by really fast, and I found it hard to understand where the story was going.

Overall; great effort, but try to focus more on little details in the future.
You obviously have some great skills, but you just need to spend more time honing in on the little things.

~Dj Sonik

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Deathisawesome responds:

Actually, the sheriff and backflip part is where I spent most of my time, I would have done the same on everything else but ran out of time :/

Yeah, I'll spend much more time on AM2, don't worry :)

The Noob Adventures Episode 3

2011-09-15 03:06:06

Great!

This was extremely entertaining :D

The story was very well put together, the animation was very clean, and all of the audio was synced very nicely!

Aside from the technical details though...

This made me laugh, a LOT; The scripting was pretty hilarious. The subtle Minecraft jokes like the "Gold Sword" one were very well done. (Many people try to incorporate jokes like this into their flash and they end up sounding cheesy)

Overall; This is a top-notch Newgrounds submission.
(Definitely recommending this for NG's Minecraft collection)

~Dj Sonik

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Falconer02 responds:

Aww thanks, man! Great and kind review! Kudos!

Explaining Clock Day

2011-09-06 02:11:15

Short, but informative :p

Although this submission has it's spammy-edge, I thought it was pretty funny :)
Definitely an awesome Clock Day submission. The exploding penguin was pretty amazing also; reminded me of something from ATHF.

Overall this flash was pretty entertaining and serves a pretty useful purpose among most "garbage" Clock submissions.
Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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Haggard responds:

I really don't know what ATHF is, so I googled it. Turns out it's a comic series on adult swim. As I don't live in the US I am not able to watch that show, so I definitely didn't get the idea of the exploding penguin from there, heh.

Ropey Rick & Friends

2011-09-06 01:27:19

Cool Beans!

This submission was well... different :p
Although this flash didn't have the smoothest transitions or the best animation; I could see this series being quite appealing :).

The voice acting was very entertaining, the characters are semi-interesting, and the dialog was pretty good. I really enjoyed how different the characters personalities were; big big plus :)

Some things could have used some work here though...
The animation was decent enough to give a pretty clear picture of what was supposed to be happening, but like I mentioned before... this piece didn't have the smoothest transitions, I would definitely put more work into that. I also would have liked to see more into this world that you've created beyond this one house with nothing around it. Do they all live in this one house? things to think about maybe?

Just friendly suggestions though :)

Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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GristlyBear responds:

Yup, I'm kind of getting the hang of transitions and animation, and I hope to introduce more and more of the characters and their world. I don't know when I'll get around to that, but I sure hope I will :P

Thanks for the review!
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