DreamEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shape Up Pumpkin]

not the best design x.x

The idea you had here was good, but I really would have liked to see a more explosive design. The simple shapes cut out of the pumpkin literally look like they could have been done in a 5 minute period.

Protips:
- I would definitely recommend physically carving the words into the pumpkin rather than writing them on
- I can still see the outline; clean off those leftover black lines
- Find a creative way to make those shapes more design-dominant

Overall not bad, but needs work

~Sonik

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ZJ responds:

Agreed. I'll try and whip up something better for next Halloween.

[Everybody's Happy Nowadays]

Really Nice! :D

I really enjoyed this artwork, and I'm very interested to see this upcoming comic!

The color, shading, outlines, and overall design of the characters looks wonderful!
You've obviously got a bit of experience with character design :]

If i could suggest any changes though...
- It would be nice to see a bit more motion in this artwork; maybe a background, and a speech bubble or two... (just to give a glimpse into the world of your story a bit more)

Overall, not bad work :]
~Sonik

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[Assassina]

Not bad :p

I didn't really get that it was a girl from first looking at it though; I think it would do you some good to do a bit of research on female facial anatomy though :p

I really enjoyed the colors, and details in the outfit; everything looks pretty clean for the most part! The shading was also pretty well done :}

Things to take a second look at:
- The eyes look "half-done"
- The mouth is just a line
- Her skin looks a bit pale x.x

Overall nice submission... it's just a shame to see so little effort put forth in the face and skin :[

~Sonik

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[Where's Grandma?]

Woahhh dude!

This is way intense!

I really have to complement your use of the Black & White style here; very creepy bro :] The gruesome little details of this picture really make it shine :] The facial expressions of both characters in this picture were PERFECTLY done, and I was kinda sad to see less detail in the background.

The crazy twist on this old school story was a perfect idea for Halloween imo, and I really applaud your efforts on this piece!

I do feel the the background could have used a tad bit more, but all in all this is really great!

~Sonik

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sirhenrystudios responds:

Thank you kind sir, I put a lot of time into this, and reworked stuff a bunch of different times to get it just right. I feel the background could have been done a bit better too, I had problems early on fading the trees just right. The Idea, the story and the detail are the main focal point of this and what I put te most time into, I wanted it to tell a story simply by looking at it. Thank you for the feedback, it's greatly appreciated

[Gauntlet Preview]

Good Start, but a bit too blue as-is...

I definitely like the design that you've created here, but I think it needs some little details/ different colors involved now! I really do have to complement the details that you've done here with just paper though; really incredible! :D

Overall I think this rocks, but needs a couple more little things!
Great work!

~Sonik

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MajesticBob responds:

Thanks! While there is still much more to do, I kinda want to keep it monochrome, I.E. Blue. However your not the first to request more color so when it's all said and done that might just happen. Thank you again for the review.

[[Pencil] A Field of Ice]

Not bad, but could use a bit more definition! :o

I rather enjoyed the amount of detail that you worked into this piece, but it would have been nice to see some color in this as well x.x

The overall outline was pretty nicely done; I look at it, and I understand what I'm looking at pretty quickly.

Alternatively, I do think you should try drawing something a little simpler than a dragon; Dragons tend to have a lotttt of tiny little details that people tend to leave out.

This submission isn't bad by any means, but I do think it's lacking in many details that can be difficult to pull off with just a pencil x.x

~Sonik

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[Greek Heritage]

Holy Crap! :DD

This artwork is amazing, and I really applaud you for creating these 3D masterpieces! I can't even imagine where you begin...
I Digress...

This piece is wonderful, and I really loved the color scheme used; it actually did remind me of the "300" artwork as mentioned in Coop's review below.

The actual characters themselves are masterpieces, and I really love how realistic you made these guys look; You my friend are a talented motha fcka!

I cannot wait to see your next works buddy... you rock! :D
~Sonik

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samulis responds:

Thanks, I'll keep putting up works and asking for the Review Request Club to review them (seriously, you guys give the best feedback I have ever seen).

[Dress to Impress]

Wow! :D

This looks really great!

I love the color schemes, and fine details on each of the characters! The shading work all looks very nice, and I see very few actual flaws in these drawings; Great! :D
Another big thing I want to note is hope much I enjoyed the work you did on the clothing (the small details really POP out in this submission)

Honestly the only thing I docked you for on this one is the background; It would have been nice to see a more Halloween-ish setting or even just a more appropriate color than light blue.

Overall though, sweet drawing! :D
~Sonik

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[Some Weird Guy]

Woah...

It's funny how this guy kinda reminds me of a character from the Fairly Oddparents xD; anyway, this guy's head is way too big in this picture. In-fact the character up front is blocking just about everything that seems to be going on behind. The colors in this are pretty odd, and I can't really understand why anyones hair would look like that.

Things to take a second looks at:
- That eyeball popping out could really use some detail work; what are those light things? is he a robot?
- Why is this stuff going on in the background? is is important?
- Who is causing all of this stuff to go on?

Honestly I feel like I could go on and on, but I wont;
What I will do though is say that you should really make sure that you have one primary focus for your art pieces rather than trying to fit a bunch of things within on picture.

Overall not bad, not great
~Dj Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Thanks for reviewing. The stuff going on in the backgrounds in'st really important. In future art submissions I won't cram a bunch of irrelevant stuff in the backgrounds. And his hair is meant to be weird.

And maybe he IS a robot.