DreamEater's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Tone Fulps]

Love the Theme! Perfect for the Portal!

The characters are again very unique, and colorful!
I love the instruments and the stage that you've created, but where is the crowd?
The biggest thing that pops out imo is your very unique Comic-book style; Very retro! I really enjoyed the way you dressed everyone in this piece, they all seem to have an almost Groovy 70's look to them.

On the other side of the rating spectrum however... I would have loved to have seen more amplifiers, and a more realistic band set-up

besides that though... this is perfect for the Art Portal!
I can't wait to see your next one!
~Dj Sonik

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[Room 1]

Great background!

Now bring it to life!

This is a basic drawing of a room, with a door; The walls are gray, and there are no windows. I would give this a higher score, but without anything else happening in this picture... there isn't really much to say. even the lines are choppy, and run over on the floor and ceiling.

Add some stuff...
anything!
but seriously liven this piece up a bit; as it stands...
this is not portal material :[

~Dj Sonik

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[Ross Fenton and the Explosion]

Cool guys DON'T look at explosions...

I agree with Haggard...

This is great for a quick drawing buddy, but this is not portal material...
You really need to put a little more work into your submissions BEFORE you submit them; otherwise your work will never be scouted for the actual portal...

Take some time.
Practice, and patiently hone in on your craft; eventually you will produce amazing work.
BUT ONLY IF YOU PRACTICE

Things to fix:
- The explosion here literally has no detail... It says "Boom"... I rest my case
- This is the same detail-less character from before, and his clothing looks like a Windows 98 screen-saver template.
- The background is blue on one side, and black on the other...

Decent effort; work harder!
~Dj Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

To tell you the truth, this is suposed to be random and stupid. :) It doesn't matter if its not portal material. I just like submitting my art. Thanks for reviewing - MisterTig

And all your points have been noted. :D

[Nice job, Ross Fenton!]

Obviously not the best work...

But not everything I see here is crap, and I understand what I'm looking at...

If I could make a few suggestions...

- The main character has some shading on his face, but could probably use some better blending and different tones.
- You should really look into studying the basics of character drawing (Anatomy, Shading, color, perspective, and so on)
- Before you put the pen to paper... try to visualize where your characters are, and whats going on around them. (this is just as important as the characters themselves.
- Put some brains in that guy's head/ on the wall (Realistically speaking, blood and brains would be everywhere if that guy JUST died.

Keep at it buddy, You'll get it!

~DJ Sonik

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MisterTig responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Your review helps a lot!

[Dead of Winter]

Creepy!

I love the detail in this piece!
The blood, The girl's clothing, and the general anatomy of this... is spot on.
I loved the way the chilling reality of what happening here, really hit me as soon as I opened the page. Personally, I almost immediately let out a pretty loud "Holy Shit" when I first saw this.

If I could change anything;
- The background is slightly bleak, and although this would make a great print (for a T-shirt or something like that); I would have liked to see a more detailed background.
- The snow is kind of boring, and doesn't really show any signs of previous life under it... or she killed someone in the middle of the Antarctic.

Besides that:
Great Work, I really dig it!
~Dj Sonik

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[Nightwolves]

Great Work! :D

Ahhh I remember doing this when I was younger; climbing buildings with my buddies in the middle of the night just like these hooligans :p.

This picture is very well drawn, and the characters you've created are all very unique looking! I love the background, although it seems that there is no mid-range layer to it. The colors are beautiful, and the shading/ details are quite professional looking!

If I could change anything:
- Like I said before, the background really needs more; It would really complete the feel of how high up these kids really are, and i think it would ultimately make everything look more realistic!
- The spot where the top of the ladder wraps around the ledge of the building... looks slightly odd (or it's just me)

Overall; Great work!
~Dj Sonik

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[Jeo flys]

Well done!

The background in this picture looks to be very well done, I love the space scene :p. The character that you've created seems to be pretty cool, and very full of personality. He's obviously pissed at someone, and about to go rip him a new ashhole quick!

The only things I would really recommend that you change are:
- The perspective from the inside of the ship looks slightly off, and your character's arms seem to be a little off as well.
- Some parts of the cockpit are oddly positioned

Besides that though...
This is a great art submission!

~Dj Sonik

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Rennis5 responds:

thank you, i'm glad you like my character i was worried people would not like him because he has no nose lol,
i've already completely redesigned the whole cockpit just about, it looks the same i just added as many things as i could think of and hopefull in a week or so i will have finished it and have the 3rd (and final) version of this picture posted for you guys to review,
i hoping to make some big changes but i will keep the same background
thank you for you'r review
:)

[Skuvari]

Haha awesome!

For a picture of a sketch that is :p

I like the very Different-Original Design, and the very abstract details.
The spinal cord hanging from the back, the lazer eyes, and the bat wings were all great touches xD. The shading on this piece doesn't look horrible, but a scanner could definitely help you clean up some of the mess that I can see in the backround x.x.

I only a couple issues to point out with this one.

The right ear looks a tad far back "Positioning wise", and the wings look a little squished/ too short towards the bottoms (they just kinda round off).

Besides that though...
Great work, Reminds me of something I would draw if i was bored in class. :D
~Dj Sonik

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NekoMika responds:

Thanks for all the detailing. May show some of my other doodles I do in class on drawing paper from time to time. Spend about an hour or two on them and sometimes longer if I am adding color.

Thanks for the review as usual. <3

[red scorpion]

Nice!

This drawing is rather well done, congrats! :D

The Good:

- I love the shading/ color on the torso and legs.
- The background is pretty cool, and I generally like the color choices there as well.
- The tattoo work is pretty awesome... besides the flaw on the cheek that has been pointed out already.
- Your character anatomy is right-on!

The Bad:

- The hair is cool, but purple/ pink may not be the right color for this one; It completely conflicts with the rest of the colors in this piece .
- The arm on the right bugs me, it seems to be in a typical pose or something (Can't really put my finger on it)

Besides that though...
This is awesome!

~Dj Sonik

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Rennis5 responds:

yeah, this one needs a few touch ups, the guy who asked me to do this wants me to make his eye white so it looks like he is blind,
aslo the hair is supposed to be red, it might look better if i make it dark red and as for the arm i think the problem is the forearm needs to be a bit fatter around where it meets the elbow,
thanks for the review dude
:)

[Velociraptor - 3D]

Very nice! :D

This looks amazing buddy!

I love the almost 3-D/ claymation look that this has... from a good distance anyway haha.
The colors you chose for this piece are wonderful; very gritty and dinosaur like.
The background complements the raptor very well, and helps the dino "Pop-out".

the only problems I really see with this one are the choppy-looking lines around the eyes of the dino, but you can't really see them unless you zoom in; maybe this was the intention?

Idk, but I digress...
This looks incredible, amazing work!
~Dj Sonik

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