Not sure what this has to do with the game x.x
but on it's own this submission is okay.
Everything looks decent for the most part, but I didn't really like that the characters mouths don't move; moving the whole body to signify each character talking reminded me way too much of Veggietales xD. Aside from all that the colors were nice, and the voice acting was well done.
Things to take a second look at:
- This flash wasn't the funniest comedy submission I've seen, I would definitely work on your joke/ dialogue writing a bit
- It would have been nice to see the mouths of each character move; It was a bit confusing without the lip syncing or anything.
- I kind of expected this to actually be somewhat related to the Pilo game
Overall not bad though, just keep at it
~Dj Sonik
-Review Request Club-