DreamEater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Achivement Madness]

Great effort, but lacking in detail.

A few things majorly stood out to me in this animation. I loved how fluid the "Kill the sheriff" scene looked, I really started to feel like the animation was starting to pick-up at this point. The Back-Flip animation that followed was equally great, and I really started to get into this! After that clip though, I started to see what I feel might have been a bit of laziness peaking through...

Things I would have focused on a little more:
- The vocal work in this was pretty muddy sounding, and overall really quiet compared to the other audio
- A lot of the other audio effects were also kinda loud, and harsh on the ears
- Did he finish all of the achievements?
- The story was somewhat hard to follow; the list in the beginning moved by really fast, and I found it hard to understand where the story was going.

Overall; great effort, but try to focus more on little details in the future.
You obviously have some great skills, but you just need to spend more time honing in on the little things.

~Dj Sonik

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Deathisawesome responds:

Actually, the sheriff and backflip part is where I spent most of my time, I would have done the same on everything else but ran out of time :/

Yeah, I'll spend much more time on AM2, don't worry :)

[The Sketch Collab 2011]

This is great!!

I really enjoyed this flash animation a lot, very captivating! :D

The fluid transitions from thing to thing were incredible to watch, and I can't even imagine how long this took to put together. It was also really interesting to see how you all worked off of each others contributions considering everyone's pretty "obviously different" talent levels; despite all that however, it seems that you all did a tremendous job here!

My only major complaints:
- I didn't like that the last part had no music, and how the different music just randomly kicked back in for the credits.
- Only daily 4th huh? Guess you must have picked a bad day to upload or something (cause this is pretty awesome)

Great work everyone! I cannot wait to see next year's Sketch Collab!
~Dj Sonik

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[Micmadness]

Couldn't stop watching!

Infckingcredible work dude. :D
this is by far the best submission of Madness Day 2011.

Sick animation bro!
~Dj Sonik

[The Noob Adventures Episode 3]

Great!

This was extremely entertaining :D

The story was very well put together, the animation was very clean, and all of the audio was synced very nicely!

Aside from the technical details though...

This made me laugh, a LOT; The scripting was pretty hilarious. The subtle Minecraft jokes like the "Gold Sword" one were very well done. (Many people try to incorporate jokes like this into their flash and they end up sounding cheesy)

Overall; This is a top-notch Newgrounds submission.
(Definitely recommending this for NG's Minecraft collection)

~Dj Sonik

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Falconer02 responds:

Aww thanks, man! Great and kind review! Kudos!

[RS - Summer Days]

Dude your work is so sick!

I love your style bro, but I'm not so much digging the audio :(.
Despite that though; the visuals kept me very captivated!
I really loved the ghost city, and the raw, gritty, dark feel that you gave everything; Extremely well done!

This submission is a true piece of Newgrounds gold (Visually speaking anyway)

Fantastic Work!
~Dj Sonik

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[Explaining Clock Day]

Short, but informative :p

Although this submission has it's spammy-edge, I thought it was pretty funny :)
Definitely an awesome Clock Day submission. The exploding penguin was pretty amazing also; reminded me of something from ATHF.

Overall this flash was pretty entertaining and serves a pretty useful purpose among most "garbage" Clock submissions.
Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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Haggard responds:

I really don't know what ATHF is, so I googled it. Turns out it's a comic series on adult swim. As I don't live in the US I am not able to watch that show, so I definitely didn't get the idea of the exploding penguin from there, heh.

[Ropey Rick & Friends]

Cool Beans!

This submission was well... different :p
Although this flash didn't have the smoothest transitions or the best animation; I could see this series being quite appealing :).

The voice acting was very entertaining, the characters are semi-interesting, and the dialog was pretty good. I really enjoyed how different the characters personalities were; big big plus :)

Some things could have used some work here though...
The animation was decent enough to give a pretty clear picture of what was supposed to be happening, but like I mentioned before... this piece didn't have the smoothest transitions, I would definitely put more work into that. I also would have liked to see more into this world that you've created beyond this one house with nothing around it. Do they all live in this one house? things to think about maybe?

Just friendly suggestions though :)

Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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GristlyBear responds:

Yup, I'm kind of getting the hang of transitions and animation, and I hope to introduce more and more of the characters and their world. I don't know when I'll get around to that, but I sure hope I will :P

Thanks for the review!
webufs

[ToastedToastyToast 1942]

ToastyToastedToastReturns

another toasty animation.

I thought the old film look at the beginning of this one was cool; not quite sure why you picked the year 1942 though :o.

overall this piece like your other ones was cool, but a good lot of things could use improving..
This was also kinda short... maybe put a little more effort into your submissions?
Or not...
Whatever makes you happy.

Cool Beans
~Dj Sonik

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[Enter ToastyToastedToast]

Coolio

This flash submission was pretty interesting.. to say the least haha.
But it was definitely entertaining!
The story was cool, and ToastyToastedToast was a pretty crazy charater with his lazer eyes that change artwork to whatever he wants.

Definitely thought this was too short though, but there's always room for improvement right?

Great Effort
~Dj Sonik

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